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I've never played bioshock, but this was a GREAT laugh. Good voice acting, pretty good drawings. All n all good job.
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"For what it's worth I got a laugh"
For what it was worth I got a laugh out of it. It might've went overboard but that's what you were going for so I can't totally scream BLAM BLAM. The high class ladies part did make me laugh out loud.
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Nothing wrong with submitting your progress. This shows you're getting the hang of flash quite well. Though it may not be front page callibor, it is great for someone new to flash.
Keep trying and I look forward to seeing more from you in the future.
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I'm definateally going to be keeping up with this series. You seem to have a really great story planned. The sprites were great (are they yours?) and the action sequences are fantastic.
Great sound, story, and animation warrant a 10/10 5/5
Author's Response:
thank you i have really worked on this story line so the other parts will be getting better
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When I rated your last submission (just like others after me I'm sure). I said that you needed to add a background. Well awesome way to add it in, you need to make these "espisodes" a little longer. They're still at a "what's the point" stage. When nothing gets accomplished, people lose interest and you're less likely to get a "fan base" of sorts.
So good job on this one, great on the improvement, and I can't wait to see more.
By and by what's a dodongo?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the pointers. and a dodongo is a legend of zelda monster.
its big, and slow.
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This was pretty good as far as "dressup" games go. A couple of little fixes that I think would help would be: make the pieces "click" together so there's no chance of gray or another color showing, and maybe some sound effects. A board to post your "creation" on would be an awesome addition. That way you could compare your creation to others. Just some general things like that.
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I think you need to be careful you don't turn it into a ripoff. I really liked Samaurai Jack and this did hit the nail on the head. I'm hoping you either do away with the bugs, or when the "evil" character turns around it's not an exact replica of you know who.
For what you did it was really well done (just work on the audio next time I had to turn my speakers all the way up to really hear what the guide was saying, but had to turn them right back down when the music came back on.) Can't wait to see more, just remember to be totally ORIGINAL
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Not sure if it's been done or not, but a Chris farley quiz would be Awesome. Sort've like the adam sandler quiz it's going to be pretty impossible to make it too difficult.
If you want an idea for a series, since you led off with Adam Sandler, thought about doing a series with the cast members from SNL that made it big? Schneider, Farley, Ferrell, Mcdonald...etc?
Author's Response:
thx for the idea. i might do one of them after the one im working on now
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Not to take anything away from you. But this wasn't good enough to be a series. If you'd add a background, and really take the time to write a solid dialog I think you have what it takes to make good flashes.
There was one quick laugh in there but that was about it. Make this a "test" and take a little more time to revamp your flash skills and bring out a REAL episode 1
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As always these games are always awesome. Kind've sad in a way to lose the Shake your mouse part.
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